Written by her own hand,
Birds, red, fly in the sky
and blue rain falls down
the sun is bright and yellow
the grass is so colorful it shines
the pretty flowers are pink
Nature is just beautiful
He inventive spelling below
She did this on her own with her understanding of spelling as it stands now (best guess spelling)
Birds, red, fly in the sky
and blu ran fols down
the sun is brit and yelow
the gras is colrful it shins
the prety flowrs are pink
natur is just butiful
Comments (5)
I think I like it with her spelling better, tho I kant tel u wy.
Comment #156706 on July 19, 2008 9:04 PM |
What a fine poet she is. And the spelling is pretty darn good. Too damn cute. That deserves to not only go on the fridge but should be matted and framed.
Comment #156739 on July 20, 2008 7:22 AM |
tell me, Trey, what led up to her writing this poem? was she out in the great outdoors? or perhaps she finished reading a book with you or Guy about nature?
I like her theme of colour she uses... and i like how she notices how the grass "shines" when under the sparkling sun! especially just after it rains a little in the morning :-)
Comment #156745 on July 20, 2008 10:58 AM |
What a sweet beautiful poem! I'm very impressed.
Comment #156836 on July 22, 2008 1:08 PM |
Thanks, I think it is beautiful of course :), dave I agree, I like her theme of color :).
funny, i never thought of rain as blue, but I guess that makes sense.
She wrote this because she told her tutor she wanted to write one and so they got out a piece of paper and pencil and she wrote it on her own.
Her spelling, considering the phonemes she knows at this point (she hasn't learned "ai" for example) is pretty good!
It's definitely going on fridge Jen (oh, forgot to mention, she wrote the words in different colors to match too)...
and I like her spelling too :D
Comment #156850 on July 22, 2008 5:46 PM |